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20 June 2011 @ 11:23 pm
Your Heartbeat Running Through Me [Onho] [Pg-13] [1/5]  
Title: Your Heartbeat Running Through Me
Pairing: Onho [Tofuho]
Genre:Supernatural, Romance   Vampire!AU, Supernatural, Romance
Rating: NC-17 (Over all) [Language, Smut]
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
Betad By: luvzcappietau
Word Count: 4,056
Summary: Lee Jinki passes out at the sight of blood, so how did he end up with a guy who drinks it?

A/N: For yuki12341234! I'm sorry for such the long wait, dear! Another top winner in the Replay4Japan auction! Although, this has turned into quie the fic. An idea I dreaded turned into one I am completely and utterly enthralled with. So ... You get your prize times five. ^^;;

& I had some really inspirational fan art to help me along, especially this pic!



 
I don't know where we're going, I don't know who we are
But I can feel your heartbeat running through me

The moon is high in the sky as Jinki strolls down the deserted road. He chose to take the long walk to his apartment from his office, enjoying the fresh night air. Refreshing after the seemingly endless meeting with the rest of the techs at the company.

He undoes the top button of his shirt, sports jacket already slung over his shoulder.

Jinki turns his gaze heaven's wards. Smiles to himself, comments inwardly on the eerie glow of the moon. If vampires existed, this would be the exact moment one would show up –

Something glistens in a shrouded alley way. He pauses, cocks his head to the side. They're two slivers of moonlight, entrancing Jinki and pulling him forward. What could they possibly be .. ?

All thoughts are ceased when Jinki is suddenly jerked into the alleyway by a shadowy hand.



Jinki has never been so scared in his life. Like, piss in his pants, cry for his mother terrified. And that's saying a lot, coming from a grown man. Why did he have to tempt fate with his late night pondering?

“Fuck.”

Knees quaking, tears building, Jinki tries to peer down at the hunched over form currently sucking the blood from his neck like a leech.”W-what?” he blubbers, praying the crazy man will release him and tell him the whole thing is some sick joke.

The man looks dazed, retracting his bloody fangs from just above Jinki's collar bone to stare at his victim.

Jinki's lips begin to move in silent prayer.

“You .. You drink detox drinks, don't you?”

“I care about my health!” Jinki squeaks, desperately wishing he could blame the idiocy leaking out of his mouth on a brain defect.

“Fuck my life.”

“Please, just let me go - “ Jinki's whimpers are cut off by a fist slamming against the warehouse wall beside his head.

“Time for lights out,” the man growls.

“No, no, please!” Jinki doesn't want “lights out”, the phrase itself can hold so many serious, bad connotations and with how this encounter has gone so far, he's thinking the worst he can think of is a walk in the park in comparison to the reality. He wriggles in the taller, stronger man's grasp like a fish on land.

But he's up against a military grade vampire, who knocks him out in a second by hitting a vital point in his neck.



Waking is a painfully slow experience. Worse than any hang over Jinki has ever had the overconsumption of alcohol to produce. He groans, tries to lift his hand to rub his excruciatingly sore neck, but finds it restrained. Fuck. What kind of freaky chick did he get so utterly wasted and believe was his “soul mate” and bring home to bang this time?

His eyes open to meet a prim and posh apartment. Huh.

“Hello? Is anyone there?” Jinki calls out, craning his neck to take in is surroundings.

So, it seems he's chained to a thick board of some sort. Kinky. He's still in his suit from work. Odd.

He opens his mouth to call out again, only for a flash of movement to catch his eyes. Squinting, he spots a black clothed back moving fluidly in what appears to be a study. Definitely a man's back, judging by the broad shoulders and the muscles that ripple even through the fabric. Well, tequila always made him do strange things; apparently this time it was a man.

“Hey!” he calls in the man's direction.

Large, soulless eyes turn on him.

“Fuck.”

Getting jumped on the way home from work, dragged to an abandoned warehouse, bitten in the neck and having his blood drained – that wasn't a weird ass dream?

Bile begins to rise in his throat.

“You're awake,” the man snaps, gracefully weaving through the open door way of the living room and passed a black leather couch to where Jinki lies, chained.

“Oh, no – Please!” Jinki begins to beg automatically, struggling against his restraints.

A hand combs through tousled ebony locks. “You're not starting this again, are you?”

Jinki's eyes dance around the room, searching for any escape. “You're insane, you need help! Please, let me go!”

“I'm not fucking insane.”

Eyes bugging out, ready to pop out of their very sockets, Jinki flails against his restraints. “Dude, you abducted me and tried to suck my blood! You're fucking insane.”

The man's gaze darkens.

“No, I'm sorry, I take that back!” Jinki is on the edge of hysterics. “You're perfectly sane! You just have a .. weird fetish! I'm sure someone else would love to do this with you, me, I'm not that kind of guy! I'm into normal stuff! No-not that you're not normal, don't get me wrong! I mean, fuck, you tried to suck my blood, who the fuck does that? Shit, shit, you're insane, please let me go - “

The man doesn't hesitate, reaches out to clench the side of Jinki's neck, once again forcing him into unconsciousness.



The next time Jinki fades back into reality, he knows what's going on. He's in a crazy man's lair.

“Are you done fucking around?”

He squeezes his eyes shut, wills himself to black out again.

The man smacks his cheeks. “Hey, I asked you a question.”

“Y-yes,” Jinki whimpers, manly to the end.

“Good.” The man pushes a cold glass to his parched lips. “Drink this.”

Doing as he's told, Jinki gulps down the entire glass of water. He stares, wide eyed, at his captor. Waiting for the next crazy command.

The man just nods. “We need to wash that shit out of your system so I can stand the taste.”

“Taste?” It slips out before Jinki can catch himself.

“Of your blood.”

“Wh-why?”

“Because - “

“Because he's cranky if he doesn't get his fix.” A lithe presence slips into the room, stopping next to the guy who kidnapped Jinki. He smiles down at him with a child like face. “You're cute.”

Jinki exhales slowly, trying not to hyperventilated. “There's fucking two of you .. Oh my God .. “

“Taemin, when did you get here?” Tall, dark and handsome asks – and shit, Jinki just called the insane man who wants to drink his blood handsome.

The boy shrugs. “When I got here. Why are you playing with your food, Minho?”

“Fucking detox drinks.”

Taemin makes a face. Standing next to the crazy guy, Minho, Jinki can see how deathly pale this Taemin kid is, and how unpale Minho is. This guy thinks he's a fucking vampire, right? So why is he tanned and ripped like some model?

“What's your name, cutie?” Taemin asks, eyes crescent moons shining down on Jinki as he leans closer.

Jinki almost finds the kid appealing, if he wasn't a complete creep for supporting his friend's insane habit. “Jinki,” he says, slightly calmed by the easy smile on the kid's face.

Patting his chest, Taemin repeats his name, “Jinki. Simple.” He nods to himself. “Well, Jinki, I'm Taemin, and this big teddy bear is Minho.”

Big teddy bear his ass. Jinki nods politely. “That's nice. Aren't you going to kill me?”

Taemin throws his head back in laughter. “You – He – Minho, did you just .. “ Peels of laughter ring from the boy as he doubles over.

Minho watches with a stony gaze.

Wiping a few stray tears from his eyes, Taemin straightens back up. “I'm sorry, I'm sorry. Oh, Jinki, you're a keeper.”

“No.”

Taemin glares at the stoic man. “Why? I like him!” he says, voice pouty.

“I'm hungry.”

Jinki watches the exchange closely, catching on that his life just may be hanging on the line depending on the winner of this argument. He can't keep his focus for long, sweat dripping down his brow and into his eyes. He blinks furiously, trying to rid himself of the result of his nervous sweating habit.

“So then, I'll go get you some food.”

“No, we can't risk another missing person. You know that.”

Taemin sucks on his bottom lip. “Then … Just snack!”

“Do I look like I want a fucking snack - “

Before Jinki realizes what's going on, Taemin has easily broken one of the chains around his wrist. He lifts Jinki's hand to his mouth and takes a deep inhalation. Minho watches with mild interest as Taemin opens his mouth to bare his sharp fangs.

“Oh, fuck - “ Jinki snaps into action, pulling away with all his strength, but despite his small figure, the boy is able to keep him still.

“Calm down,” Taemin coos, trailing the points of his canines along the veins in Jinki's wrist.

Heart racing at a dangerous speed, Jinki figures he'll keel over pretty soon just from the stress of the situation.When Taemin finally pierces his skin, he lets out a shout.

Minho shoots forward and clamps a hand around Jinki's mouth. “Fuck, Taemin!” he berates, muffling Jinki's terrified screams.

Eyes glistening with something darker than lust, Taemin looks up at Minho while running his tongue slowly over his blood soaked teeth. Jinki takes one look at his own blood being treated like some dessert, and passes out.



“What the hell are you doing, Taemin?”

“.. Taste … He's yummy, wanna try?”

“Get the fuck out!”

“You … attached … ?”

“You're draining my food!”

“Why haven't … Tastes great and you know it … “

“Get. Out.”

Through the fog of unconsciousness, Jinki picks up on part of the conversation. The only voice he can hear clearly is Minho's, somewhere close to his ear and hissing with anger. Something slithers along his wrist, moist.

Jinki is consumed by darkness.



He's getting tired of this endless cycle of passing out and coming to, still in this insane situation. Jinki rests his head against the board he's still chained to, exhales deeply. His appendages ache from being stretched roughly without any release for so long.

How long has he been here? Is anyone worried about him? The people at his company probably don't even realize he's gone …

An exhausted sigh escapes from his lips.

Is anyone even here? He lifts his head slightly, examines the surrounding area while listening for even the slightest give away Minho is present. Nothing. He sets his head back down. He's too tired to try anything with this opportunity ..

Is he just going to resign himself to his own death?

There's a click somewhere behind the wall in front of him. A few moments later, Minho appears, clad in yet another black shirt, this time a v-neck tee, and Armani sunglasses. A fashionable vampire .. Jinki doesn't even have the energy to analyze this.

Minho glances over at him. “Awake?”

Jinki stares back.

“I'll get you something to eat,” Minho says absently, thumb moving to brush against his bottom lip.

That's when Jinki notices the red stains on his captor's lips. He shuts his eyes so he doesn't have to see evidence that this almost normal looking guy, abnormal only in his above average looks, actually drank people's blood.

He's light headed, unable to focus even when Minho reappears at his side with a plate full of food. Jinki is unchained a moment later and Minho guides him to the black leather couch.

“Why are you trusting me?” Jinki asks while sinking into the plush sofa.

Minho sets the plate on the coffee table in front of him along with a glass of water. “Are you in any shape to try something?”

Jinki shakes his head.

“Exactly.”

Jinki stares at the food. “Why are you feeding me?”

“Because you're starving.”

“But you're just going to suck my blood and kill me.”

Minho pushes the plate closer. “Please eat.”

“Which death do you think is better, starvation or being eaten?”

“We don't eat people,” Minho comments softly, large gaze trained on the floor.

Studying him half heartedly, Jinki can only find confusion in this man – vampire? Giving in, Jinki reaches forward and takes the plate of food. Minho watches him devour the entirety of it in silence, elbows resting on his knees, hands clasped, from where he is perched on the edge of a chase lounge chair.

When he finishes, Jinki sets the plate back on the coffee table. His eyes meet Minho's expectantly.

Minho blinks as if shaking himself from a daze. “Tired?”

Jinki nods, then eyes the board. There are rusty brown spots on it. He wonders briefly if it's from his own blood, or some unknown stranger who was here before him.

“You can sleep on an actual bed, if you want to,” the vampire suggests, getting to his feet.

“Why are you doing this?”

Minho scratches the back of his head. “I'm sorry, I was just hungry earlier. It makes me a different person.”

“But you're not hungry anymore? I thought you told that Taemin kid you couldn't kidnap anyone else?”

Minho looks taken off guard. “So you were paying attention … I have connections with a blood bank.”

Jinki narrows his gaze at Minho. “Do you really need blood to survive?”

“Kind of goes along with the whole vampire deal.”

“And how do you know you're a vampire?”

Minho opens his mouth, and just above his harmless appearing canines a pair of fangs come down. “Woke up one morning with these and the feeling like I would die without human blood.”

“Just like that? You just became a vampire?”

A guarded look crosses across Minho's face. “Well, no, someone turned me. But I didn't realize it at the time.”

“How did someone turn you?” Jinki questions, curiosity bubbling to the surface.

“I thought you said you were tired?” Minho retorts, getting to his feet. “Come on.”

Unsteadily, Jinki follows him. He spares a glance towards the front door, but he doesn't think he could face the multitude of locks on it even in his best state of mind, let alone right now when his mind is reeling. Minho leads him down a hallway, the majority of doors shut, aside from one at the end.

“You can sleep in here,” he says, motioning into the room.

A cloud floats in the middle of the black and white decor of the room. Jinki has never been so relieved to see a real bed, let alone one as plush looking as the round one before him. Minho enters the room ahead of him, pulls back the covers on the bed and tosses the unnecessary throw pillows off to the side.

“Is it okay?”

Jinki nods wordlessly, sits down on the edge of the bed and stares up at Minho.

“Do you need anything?”

“Can you leave?”

Minho draws his bottom lip in, between his teeth. “Right, of course .. “ he comments, then drifts out of the room with a departing click of the door shutting behind him.

Feeling more at ease, Jinki makes himself comfortable by slipping out of his pants and crinkled dress shirt. He might be a prisoner of this apartment, but so far he hasn't been eaten alive by vampires. If anything, he's getting vibes from Minho that he doesn't want to eat him.

He might as well try to rest.



The night sky is stained red and orange, with lavender storm clouds. Lightning slithers out of the clouds like serpents, not touching down on the earth, but merely poking out their heads before diving back into the abyss over head.

Jinki turns from the window, the city outside casting long shadows into the room. The room is plain. A single shelf dedicated to awards and trophies. He can't see close enough, but he thinks the majority are athletic awards. Against the wall is a bed, covers a disheveled mess on the floor while a man lies writhing on the bed.

Watching in horror, Jinki wants to move forward to help, but finds his body floating upwards uncontrollably. The man on the bed curls onto his side, facing him now. That's when Jinki realizes it's Minho, but younger looking. Maybe seventeen. Not even a man. His eyes are squeezed shut, jaw clenched, as he clutches his bed sheets and tight fists.

“Minho, Minho! Open your door!” a distinctly motherly voice calls through the locked door.

He doesn't answer Jinki's gaze flicks between him, back to the door. Minho's father is pounding on the door now.

“Son, I'm not giving you a choice here! Open this door right now!”

His very breath is stolen from his lips when Minho's eyelids shoot up, revealing crimson eyes. Despite the torturous amount of pain he appears to be in, Minho crawls from his bed to the window, where Jinki's foot is hovering just inches above.

Jinki is floating upside down, head above the door to the room, just as the window closes shut behind Minho and his parents burst into the room. They look around in dismay for their son, but he's no where to be found. Just a mess of bed linens.



Jinki jumps awake from the dream. His breathing comes out strained and his heart is pounding.

“Are you okay?”

He falls back against the multitudes of pillows cushioning his sleep. Somehow, he isn't shocked by Minho's voice, or his presence at his side. Instead, he focuses on wiping the film of sweat from his forehead. The room is shrouded in darkness aside from the street lamps glow coming through the parted curtains.

“Did you want to be … like this?” he asks, eyes open and pointed at the ceiling.

Minho trains his gaze on his hands, folded in his lap before him. “No.”

Jinki turns his head to the side. “Then why?”

“I was young and wanted to rebel. My parents already had their suspicions I wasn't the perfect son they wanted, that I was interested in .. well, men. So I decided to prove them right. Only, the guy I hooked up with ended up to be a … yeah.”

Taking it all in, surprised Minho was able to say so much about it, Jinki is slightly taken aback. “He turned you just like that?”

Minho shrugs. “I thought it was just some kinky shit, his biting my neck and then smearing his own blood on me … I didn't know any better.”

Jinki's screws his eyebrows together. “But how can you be like this and still kill people?”

The man remains silent.

“I don't understand you at all. You keep me locked up here and tell me you'll kill me, but now you're treating me like a guest. You talk like a normal person, but only after you've taken someone's life. How does that even make sense?” he let's the words stream out, no longer bothering with hiding his thoughts.

“I can explain - “ Just as Minho begins, there's a crash of noise in the front of the house.

He stands up quickly. “Stay here,” he orders sharply before disappearing out the door.

Jinki listens to the commotion. There are multiple voices swelling into one mess, Minho's the only steady baritone standing out amongst them. Looking around for something to prepare himself in case the people found him Jinki spots a stack of cleanly folded clothing at the foot of the bed.

He quickly dresses, noting the clothes are brand new and fitted exactly for him. There was something more to Minho he wasn't aware of.

The voices start to come closer. Unsure what to do, Jinki pokes his head out of the door to see what's going on.

“We know, Minho!” exclaims a man with bleach blond locks.

“You can't fool us!” joins in another, shorter man, who's waving a bottle of beer in the air.

Jinki spots a familiar face as Taemin comes out of the sidelines to step up to Minho, who seems to be positioned in front of the hall way to stop them from going further. He smiles coyly while tracing a long finger along the man's arm.

“We're just looking out for you,” he purrs, “No use being bonded to someone who isn't one of us.”

“I'm not bonded,” Minho says, irritation hidden well.

“Taemin told us, and besides, he wouldn't be alive right now if you weren't,” the blond one retorts.

“Kibummie's right,” the short one pipes in.

Before Minho can argue the point any further, Kibum, the blond one, spots Jinki. A dangerous smirk plays at his lips as they lock eyes. Jinki's heart jumps in his throat. With inhuman speed, he darts passed Minho and to Jinki.

“Well, aren't you a pretty one,” Kibum regards, taking hold of Jinki's chin to examine his features closer.

And just when he thought the worst was over with, fear grips Jinki at the throat once again. A strangled noise escapes from his lips as Kibum leans forward to smell just above Jinki's pulsing carotid artery.

“Kibum,” Minho warns, face tight as he weighs his options to avoid the situation turning bad.

“Why is your heart beating so fast?” Kibum questions, pressing his hand across Jinki's chest, fingers splayed as if clutching at Jinki's heart. “If I bite you now, you'll loose too much blood to live through turning.”

Jinki tries to pull away.

With incredible strength, Kibum grabs his shoulders and pins him against the wall. “Where are you going?”

“Kibum!”

“Jonghyun, hold him back,” Kibum snaps, sensing Minho reaching his peak of patience.

The short one listens obediently. Taemin steps back to observe, eye lids drooping from alcohol consumption.

“M-Minho,” Jinki gasps, terrified of this man and his breath, reeking of booze.

Kibum clamps his hand over Jinki's mouth. “Leave lover boy out of this. Get ready to cross tot he other side, baby.”

Minho struggles against the thick pair of arms restraining him. He kicks Jonghyun off of him and into Taemin, both falling to the floor from the collision. Kibum's fangs gleam as they near the crook of Jinki's neck, tongue flicking over them quickly. Tears begin to slide down Jinki's cheeks.

Just as Kibum's fangs pierce his skin, Minho wrenches the vampire away. He throws him against the opposite wall with force enough to leave a mark.

“Get out! All of you!” Minho growls, fangs bared and finger pointing towards the front door.

Taemin rushes out before another word can be spoken, but Jonghyun has to scurry to Kibum's side to help pull him out of the apartment, still dazed from being thrown. Minho follows them, slamming the door shut while Jonghyun's foot is practically still in the door. It takes him a moment to secure all of his locks, but when he turns back, Jinki is a wreck on the floor.

His fangs retract back into his gums quickly. “Jinki.”

Minho falls onto the floor beside him to try to comfort him, but Jinki pushes himself away. “Jinki, I - “

“Stay away from me.” A quiver of a voice speaks from where Jinki has curled in on himself and has his face pressed against his thighs.

“I'm sorry … “

Jinki makes no move to say anything to him, so Minho stands up and retreats back to his study. Forcing his breathing to come out in normal puffs of air, Jinki calms himself from the brink of hyperventilating. He doesn't know how long he stays pressed against the door to his room – his room, because he's trapped in this place and needs something to call his own – before he finally gets the strength to go inside, shut the door, and curl up on the bed.

He doesn't sleep the rest of the night.
 
 
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queen dubuqueen_anything on June 21st, 2011 05:28 am (UTC)
Spot for yuki12341234! <3
yuki12341234yuki12341234 on June 22nd, 2011 05:15 am (UTC)
YAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY MINEEE♥
This was definitely worth the wait ^O^ onew is perfect and just the way i imagined him-ordinary and scared hehe (I love ordinary jinki for some reason :DD)
kibum and them are so scary lolol but it's sexy X))
and minho, I can't really tell what he wants! Is he already in love with jinki?! X33333
& I'm so happy that you're making me a 5x fic ;~;
queen dubu: kings!onhoqueen_anything on June 23rd, 2011 08:08 pm (UTC)
I'm so happy you approve of it all, dear! ;o; <3
You'll see what's up the next part ;)

I appreciate your comment!
luvzcappietau: MinSunluvzcappietau on June 21st, 2011 05:51 am (UTC)
I should get a spot girl *snapsfingers* XD

I'm just kidding XD You know I'll be heereee, you just need to say, 'okay I posted it! :D' XD

Alright, so yeah, you know, me and this fic, it's like, omg, gah.

GAH.

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH.

Enough Gahsss!

This was *painfully* awesome. I feel like I smother you with too much compliments, but I can't *help* it xD

I is in loooooooooove, with Minho, one, but yeah, this whole story, even *Onew*. Seriously. I love Onew. XD

"Minho scratches the back of his head. “I'm sorry, I was just hungry earlier. It makes me a different person.” "

I need to pay attention XD

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj178/heynickyy/SHINee%20GIFs/tumblr_ldkfwkDE101qzzb83o1_400.gif

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Epicness, epicness, epicness.

It's so epic *o*
queen dubu: Rocker!Onewqueen_anything on June 23rd, 2011 08:09 pm (UTC)
& you're epic for making me fall in love with this plot idea :*

I looooove you and your amazingness ~ <3
ontaejongminkey on June 21st, 2011 05:55 am (UTC)
To tell you the truth bb, my heart is pounding with adrenaline and excitement all throughout. And, this is just the first chapter! I also lol'd at some points! Omg. The way you write had me glueing my eyes on my laptop's screen!

I am so in love with this!
Thank you so much for sharing and I can't wait for the next installments! :)
queen dubu: InTheAir!Onewqueen_anything on June 23rd, 2011 08:10 pm (UTC)
Ah! Your comment has made me sooo happy!! Thank you so much! ^o^ <3
Lycianse: #flamedubuthpeekaboo on June 26th, 2011 02:38 am (UTC)
omg! :D you posted a tofuho! ---must read--- XDD
spot spot first :3
Lycianse: #flamedubuthpeekaboo on June 26th, 2011 04:13 am (UTC)
omg i'm so so so so so so so so - i love this fic. XD like totally honestly. i feel like Jinki's so badly frightened, too badly and D: I feel kind of bad for him when I see him near to hyperventilating ;___; but it was really awesome throughout the fic, the beginning was quite cute and funny - till the end i was so engrossed in reading *___*

update soon please? 8D
queen dubu: Rocker!Onewqueen_anything on June 26th, 2011 04:30 am (UTC)
Awwww ;o; You're much too kind!! Honestly, I'm so in love with this fic my self .. ^^;;

I will update next week, plan on it ;) <3
Lycianse: #Jinkithpeekaboo on June 26th, 2011 04:39 am (UTC)
it's always great to see that an author loves her own works! ^_^ I'm not being kind ^//^;; i wanted to leave a much longer and better comment for you but D: ((isn't good in writing long ;___;))

wah, really? :D I'll look forward to it <3
queen dubuqueen_anything on June 26th, 2011 04:42 am (UTC)
I appreciate hearing from you at all <3
heaven leehahappyness on June 26th, 2011 03:12 am (UTC)
normally, I wouldn't read vampire fanfics but I decided to give this a try and lsdkjfksdsdlf sldkfjaskdsldkf I want more *A* I can't wait for the next part
queen dubu: Sexy!Onewqueen_anything on June 26th, 2011 04:17 am (UTC)
Normally I wouldn't /write/ a vampire fic XD I'm so glad you gave this a chance :)
a_life_defiant: minhoa_life_defiant on June 26th, 2011 03:24 am (UTC)
This is EPIC!

I'm really excited to see more. :D

queen dubu: Rainbow!Onewqueen_anything on June 26th, 2011 04:17 am (UTC)
Thanks dear!! <3
onewlurver on June 26th, 2011 04:09 am (UTC)
Oh my goodness I love this concept and storyline. YOU HAVE TO FINISH IT!!!! I'll be reading and can't wait for part 2 :D
queen dubu: kings!onhoqueen_anything on June 26th, 2011 04:18 am (UTC)
I'm working on it! ^o^ I appreciate your enthusiasmmm! It gets me pumped to write >D
onewlurver on July 3rd, 2011 07:19 pm (UTC)
Yay! That's good then. I was so miffed when I saw this post was recent, because it meant that I would have to wait for the next one. But, it's also exciting because I'll be anticipating every chapter. Sorry for being creepy XD
queen dubuqueen_anything on July 8th, 2011 05:52 pm (UTC)
No worries, dear! I will be updating soon and regularly-ish, about once a week. Not much waiting :) <3
Anniekwanahnee on June 26th, 2011 06:04 am (UTC)
This fic seems pretty interesting OwO I just don't like Taemin, I don't know why :( Hope to know more about all the shinee members' personality in your fanfic n_n
Keep writing!
queen dubu: Sexy!Onewqueen_anything on June 26th, 2011 06:25 am (UTC)
Oh, I hope Tae can grow on you :(
I will dear n_n <3
reikureinyuu on June 27th, 2011 03:12 pm (UTC)
wow..
the lacking of tofuho makes me scream in excitedness when you post it..
this is cool..
and i'll definietly track thia xD
i love youe summary btw (Lee Jinki passes out at the sight of blood, so how did he end up with a guy who drinks it?) OMG... how adorable it was..
a guy being passed out just because he's see a blood lol..
need moree~~
queen dubu: Super!Onewqueen_anything on June 28th, 2011 03:13 am (UTC)
Awww, yeah, there really isn't enough onho around! Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
shimraemi: seunghyun preshshimrayoung on June 27th, 2011 04:24 pm (UTC)
Wah this was gorgeous♥
i always like the concept where Minho is a sexy and handsome vampire falling in love with Jinki ..>
queen dubu: Crazy!Keyqueen_anything on June 28th, 2011 03:13 am (UTC)
I hope it's not done tooooo often? Thanks :)
Boogie Man.i_am_rolling on June 28th, 2011 12:25 am (UTC)
oh this is so addicting, cannot wait for the next chapter :))
queen dubu: micpink!onewqueen_anything on June 28th, 2011 03:14 am (UTC)
Thank you! & omg, your icon is hot. *-*
Boogie Man.: Minhoi_am_rolling on June 28th, 2011 04:07 am (UTC)
ohhh you know it. but then again it's onew so it HAS to be hahah :))
queen dubu: Sexy!Onewqueen_anything on June 28th, 2011 04:14 am (UTC)
Oh giiiirl, you can say /that/ again!
Boogie Man.i_am_rolling on June 28th, 2011 05:23 pm (UTC)
mmmmhmmm you know it!
i'm shanaya, by the way haha :))
queen dubuqueen_anything on June 28th, 2011 11:54 pm (UTC)
I'm Christine! Mind if I friend you?
Boogie Man.: Jaejoongi_am_rolling on June 29th, 2011 12:01 am (UTC)
no problem :)) i was about to ask you that
queen dubuqueen_anything on June 29th, 2011 12:18 am (UTC)
Yay! But just to warn you, I'm about to leave for a week long trip ^^;;
Boogie Man.: keyi_am_rolling on June 29th, 2011 02:41 am (UTC)
no worries my friend, i am too hahah
ill be gone aaalll next week :))
(Anonymous) on July 3rd, 2011 06:39 pm (UTC)
ontae n onho fan ^ ^v
OMG I hv always love ur fic!
sexy-vam minho is sooooo hot!
n vulnerable tofu is <33
do update asap. hwaiting!
Ramen Loverramen_lover30 on July 7th, 2011 11:19 pm (UTC)
Interesting!
looking forward to next part XD
queen dubuqueen_anything on July 8th, 2011 05:49 pm (UTC)
Thanks for reading! Next part will be up soon ~